why do people take risk
Why Do People Take Risk
Class: XG2A
Number: 1099302005
Name: Molly Hsieh
Topic sentence: People love taking risks because of the two main reasons
Supporting sentence 1: First, by the time people take risks, they might gain extreme excitement
Example: The situation……people’s mind
Supporting sentence 2: Second, the achievement people achieve can make them believe themselves as capable human-beings and increase their self- confidence
Example: For example……capable person
Concluding sentence: All in all, the magic power created by taking risks can make people addictive
Risk is not only dangerous but charming. People love taking risks because of the two main reasons. First, by the time people take risks, they might gain extreme excitement. The situation such as bungee jumping, the feeling of the heart seems to jump out of the mouth absolutely wins people’s mind. Second, the achievement people achieve can make them believe themselves as capable human-beings and increase their self- confidence. For example, the moment Kelly Perkins reached the summit of Mount Everest, she thought herself not a weak patient anymore but a capable person. All in all, the magic power created by taking risks can make people addictive.
Class: XG2A
Number: 1099302005
Name: Molly Hsieh
Topic sentence: People love taking risks because of the two main reasons
Supporting sentence 1: First, by the time people take risks, they might gain extreme excitement
Example: The situation……people’s mind
Supporting sentence 2: Second, the achievement people achieve can make them believe themselves as capable human-beings and increase their self- confidence
Example: For example……capable person
Concluding sentence: All in all, the magic power created by taking risks can make people addictive
Risk is not only dangerous but charming. People love taking risks because of the two main reasons. First, by the time people take risks, they might gain extreme excitement. The situation such as bungee jumping, the feeling of the heart seems to jump out of the mouth absolutely wins people’s mind. Second, the achievement people achieve can make them believe themselves as capable human-beings and increase their self- confidence. For example, the moment Kelly Perkins reached the summit of Mount Everest, she thought herself not a weak patient anymore but a capable person. All in all, the magic power created by taking risks can make people addictive.
